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Prelude to Sunday Sonnets: On Blank Verse

Friday, December 8th, 2006

On Blank Verse, and on a Prelude to William Cowper.
Teri writes of a poet who’s meant a great deal to her, William Cowper. She cites an interesting poem of his, on the reaction of hunting animals to … well, to what is natural.

He plays a lovely jest with language and almost, dare I say, physics, near the end; I shan’t spoil it, click the link and go read what Teri wrote.

Cowper was an Englishman (1731-1800) who wrote, movingly, both of the great topics of the day, and, very popularly, of simple life in the English countryside. He was also an accomplished hymnist and fervent evangelical Christian.

Indeed, it was this last that was perhaps his salvation from terrible mental illness that plagued him for most of his life. Undeniably brilliant and creative, he was prone to deep depression, and, possibly, schizophrenia.

Trenches on the Somme. Mary Riter Hamilton, 1919
Flowers are nice, surely?

Now, I rather like Cowper. I’m not certain he’s great art for The Ages, but his language is certainly highly evocative, and he writes with wonderful expression. In short, the kind of poetry that both men and women can like.

He wrote in blank verse: that is to say, in language that did not rhyme, but had a regular meter (rhythm, if you will).

Marlowe and Shakespeare were perhaps the pioneers of this in the English language: Shakespeare (in King John), spectacularly, but dangerously (given less competent imitators who plagued the medium for centuries, and still do today, only we now call it “rock and roll lyrics”) used it at times to convey abrupt thematic and dramatic transitions:

Death?
My lord?
A grave.
He shall not live.

Consider how amazing a break this was with styles of the times, and what a challenge for actors. Verily, Shakespeare was the Quentin Tarantino of his day.

Milton (of Paradise Lost), embraced this form, and its ability to convey complex ideas (outside of drama) with superlative skill. Cowper was accused at times of imitating Milton too much. Given the centuries-long legacy of blank verse, this seems perhaps a tad unfair; certainly, though, Milton was a staggeringly talented exemplar of this during Cowper’s lifetime.

On a similar topic, we can contrast John Bunyan’s rhymed verse, from Pilgrim’s Progress (mostly prose, but with some verse):

But blessed Michael helped me, and I,
By dint of sword, did quickly make him fly.
Therefore to him let me give lasting praise,
And thank and bless his holy name always.

And Milton, writing similarly:


MICHAEL and his Angels prevalent
Encamping, plac’d in Guard thir Watches round,
Cherubic waving fires: on th’ other part
SATAN with his rebellious disappeerd,
Far in the dark dislodg’d, and void of rest,
His Potentates to Councel call’d by night;

Now note the difference. The first is coherently written, well-written. It’s a classic of English Literature. The second, likewise.

But look at the phrases: “void of rest”. “call’d by night”. “Guard thir watches round”.

These are phrases that the poet probably wouldn’t have chosen — certainly not in such a mellifluous flow — were he not to have the privilege of writing blank verse.

And these are magnificent phrases.

On Wolfeday (Which I believe is celebrated on Sunday the 10th of December in 2006), I shall quote a little of Cowper’s poetry, and couple it with a 20th century painting or two (one shown above) that I consider complement the subject matter.

-wolfe

UPDATE: I originally messed up and cited John Buchan, not John Bunyan as author of Pilgrim’s Progress. Buchan was an early 20th century British writer of thrillers; Bunyan wasn’t. Teri kindly corrected me, and it is corrected above in the original text.

Sunday Sonnets 2

Saturday, November 11th, 2006

Technically it’s Saturday, but the day is so appropriate for this one. Sunday Sonnets 1 is on hold; sorry, but I’m not happy with what I’ve written. I’ll work on it over time.

In Flanders Fields
Lt. Colonel John Alexander McCrae, M.D.

In Flanders fields the poppies blow
Between the crosses, row on row,
That mark our place; and in the sky
The larks, still bravely singing, fly
Scarce heard amid the guns below.

We are the Dead. Short days ago
We lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow,
Loved, and were loved, and now we lie
In Flanders fields.

Take up our quarrel with the foe:
To you from failing hands we throw
The torch; be yours to hold it high.
If ye break faith with us who die
We shall not sleep, though poppies grow
In Flanders fields.

The multitalented John McCrae was a Canadian poet, artist, author, physician, professor, surgeon, and soldier who served in the Canadian Army during the Boer War and World War I.

After interning at Johns Hopkins, and being offered a fellowship at McGill, he interrupted his medical work to serve in the Boer War in 1899. Though he said little, his African war experiences had clearly left him with complex feelings about war. While he still believed in the necessity of fighting to right wrongs, he was appalled at the brutality and suffering of soldiers, especially wounded soldiers. He resigned his commission as Major in 1904.

He published papers, continued to write poetry, traveled, drew, taught, and, of course, wound up serving again, as a field surgeon in World War I, serving on the Western front.

Over a horrific period in spring 1915, the Germans started using chemical weapons against Canadian troops. Casualties were terribly high, and McCrae insisted on living and working right at the front.to treat the wounded as rapidly as he could. He wrote his mother:

The general impression in my mind is of a nightmare. We have been in the most bitter of fights. For seventeen days and seventeen nights none of us have had our clothes off, nor our boots even, except occasionally. In all that time while I was awake, gunfire and rifle fire never ceased for sixty seconds ….. And behind it all was the constant background of the sights of the dead, the wounded, the maimed, and a terrible anxiety lest the line should give way.

On May the second, a student he’d mentored died: Lt. Alexis Helmer of Ottawa. There was not much left to bury; he was killed by an artillery shell. What there was, was gathered in a bag, fastened with safety pins. With no chaplain, and safety forbidding light, McCrae officiated at a brief funeral service, doing his Presbyterian best to remember the Anglican order of service, and Helmer was buried along with the rest.

On the evening of May the third, McCrae spent 20 minutes and wrote this poem.

Lt. Col. Edward Morrison, the CO at the scene described it (I thank Rob Ruggenberg for much of this content):

“This poem was literally born of fire and blood during the hottest phase of the second battle of Ypres. My headquarters were in a trench on the top of the bank of the Ypres Canal, and John had his dressing station in a hole dug in the foot of the bank. During periods in the battle men who were shot actually rolled down the bank into his dressing station.

Along from us a few hundred yards was the headquarters of a regiment, and many times during the sixteen days of battle, he and I watched them burying their dead whenever there was a lull. Thus the crosses, row on row, grew into a good-sized cemetery.

Just as he describes, we often heard in the mornings the larks singing high in the air, between the crash of the shell and the reports of the guns in the battery just beside us.

I have a letter from him in which he mentions having written the poem to pass away the time between the arrival of batches of wounded, and partly as an experiment with several varieties of poetic metre.”

The poem itself is a rondeau; a French form of poetry with a fixed, stylized form: 3 stanzas: a quintet, a quatrain, and a sextet. (Fancy words meaning 5 lines of poetry, 4 lines, 6 lines). The rhyming scheme is of the form A(R) A B B R, A A B R, and A A B B A R, where A represents one 8 syllable phrase ending in a particular rhyme, and B represents a different 8 syllable phrase ending in a different rhyme. The refrain, R, is typically based upon the opening line of the poem, but this need not be. It typically is also only 4 syllables, but some practitioners of the form differ.

The constrictions of the form are intended as a challenge to the poet to express himself/herself succinctly and poignantly. You can judge for yourself the degree to which he succeeded.

The third verse was often used by jingoistic governments to stir up patriotic fervor in support of that war, and future wars. Personally, I believe there is such a thing as just war, and that sometimes sacrifices — terrible sacrifices — must be made. But to simply quote that third verse in an ad for Victory Bonds, or in support of future wars without being very aware of the Hell on earth that McCrae and others endured would be a terrible act.

On November 11, we remember those who served, those who sacrificed, and those who have gone on before us.

With thanks to Rob Ruggenberg’s fine page on In Flanders Fields, Wikipedia, and Veterans Affairs Canada.

Sunday Sonnets 1c

Saturday, November 4th, 2006

This episode is somewhat poorly written. Apologies. It’s more a stream of consciousness than a clean narrative. I’m dumping a thousand words (the hunting story) because they don’t fit. Maybe I’ll give you a picture.

And so my tale continues.

So, I’m a young lad with my Honda, I’m not sure whether to pursue graduate studies — I know I can earn far, far more by avoiding all this. I am heading out west on the highway for the sea, for mountains, and for a trusted advisor.

The hunting portion of the tale? It doesn’t fit. I’m sorry. I know I noted it as what was next, but… to me, when I read the totality of what I’m trying to convey, it just doesn’t fit.

As the late Johnnie Cochrane infamously said of OJ Simpson, “If it doesn’t fit, you must acquit”.

So I rode the road.

I shot a great deal.

I should scan those pictures in some day.

I left my rifle with a trusted friend before crossing into Canada. I was licensed, but I knew my Uncle’s new wife would be upset if I turned up with a gun. She was solidly and stolidly hard-left Canadian, as was her predecessor.

I was named for my uncle. On his side of the family he was the first ever to do a PhD. He was brilliant, clever, witty, and had a nice goatee. I could master at least one of those four attributes.
And it was to him that I was journeying to see.

He was a lot like me. We were both quiet, intelligent people that tried to avoid controversy but then, once engaged, gripped it by its throat and throttled it.

I’d never had a brother. My Dad had frequently been overseas when I was a young lad. My uncle had been the closest male relative. I admired him greatly, disagreed with him on some things, and, above all, respected him and his advice and wisdom.

And I was his namesake.

He’d been recently divorced — ostracized by the family, most hurtfully by his father, and I was journeying west on a family mission to speak to him, assess the situation — for good or ill, my family respected me as a neutral diplomat — and talk.

But of course, I was also journeying for selfish reasons. I was deeply uncertain of my own immediate future. I was coming to hate the political correctness and stifling embrace of academia.

I needed advice.

So I headed across the border to Saskatchewan. Showed my US passport and Canadian drivers license. You’d think additional credentials would have helped. Not so. Confusion to bureaucrats.

And this was pre-9/11.

I made it across. Edmonton was under 14 hours. I could make it if I rode into the night. Did I want to?

I gazed down at the speedometer. Glanced at the mirrors. Thought about all that was behind me.

I made my decision and cruised on into the night.

Damn. I needed to brush my teeth.

-wolfe

Sunday Sonnets 1b

Wednesday, November 1st, 2006

The next part is written, but shall be only posted after there are two comments to this post from two different people other than myself.

So where were we? Ah yes. I had a crise de conscience… I was unsure what I was doing, so I decided to head out on the highway.

We know the middle of this tale; I’ve given it away:

The moment I was out of sight of the crowd I’d read it in front of, I’d thrown the Oxford Book of English Verse — a wonderful book — in a garbage can. Suffice to say, I had some feelings about this poem, or, rather, what it represented.

I’ve never done that before or since. It’s a highly irrational thing to do.

So, I’m a young lad with my Honda, I’m not sure whether to pursue graduate studies — I know I can earn far, far more by avoiding all this. I am heading out on the highway for the sea, for mountains, and for a trusted advisor.

I’d arranged it with my company. 3 weeks of freedom. I’d arranged it with my graduate advisor. An entire month.

Off I go. From exactly where, I shan’t say. Suffice to say, in a triangle formed by North Carolina, Newfoundland, and Manitoba was the university in question. Somewhere in the North East.

It’s strange, hard, harsh and lonely riding across a continent. Sleep (or the lack thereof) can catch up with you. You start to see things that aren’t — quite — there. For me it’s always been the color blue. When I start to become excessively fatigued, the color blue floods my perceptions. First on the edges, then increasingly overwhelming.

So I make my first stop. 11pm. I’ve been riding since 4am. I head into the hotel; I’ve booked my reservations.

“Sorry” she says, almost robotically. “We had a UFO convention come in”.

“But I’ve a reservation… you charged my credit card”

“Oh… tee-hee. We refunded it.”.

I blink. And in doing so, I realize I lose.

I end up elsewhere.

It’s a lumberyard. Next to some godawful biker bar pounding urban white-trash heavy metal. And yes, for my sins, there’s a church opposite and a police station on the other side.

Sure enough, I’m rousted around 1 am. I stagger up, squint into the light at the badges, yep, they seem cops. I show my ID, and stay well, well away from my very obvious rifle. After checking me out on their computer the cops obviously relax. We chat a bit. It becomes very clear this isn’t a good place to be.

The bikers aren’t nice.

Well, I’ve had 90 minutes of sleep. What the heck. I’m in my 20’s, what can possibly go wrong? I head out on the highway, looking for adventure.

Dawn breaks.

And I see Lake Superior.

Lord, that is beautiful.

They say the warbrides came over… were put on a train in Halifax, in Boston… and headed west. They’d wake each other up to say “look! the Great Lakes!”. Of course, the great lakes would still be, much to their stupefaction, present after 18 hours.

But it’s beautiful. The green cascades down the rough Canadian Shield. (I’m still on the US side, but it’s a similar geographic phenomenon). The glint of gold on the blue waters. The smell. Peace. Nothing. Everything. Life.

God that’s good.

Here’s where every woman reading this will hate me. No, you will, I bet.

I remembered my hunting license. I knew I’d a friend from university with a couple of young ones. By GPS he was only 20 miles out. He could use the meat.

Part III to follow. (Don’t worry, hunting’s not a big part of this, and I’m inclined to skip it entirely since I’m concerned it will offend people).

-wolfe

Sunday Sonnets

Monday, October 30th, 2006

I thank poster Zogmama for this excellent suggestion, including the title. Properly speaking, very few of the poems, songs, and works of prose that I write about here will be sonnets. But it’s a nice bit of alliteration, and so it remains.

I’ll post all (or much) of a poem I quite like, then comment a bit on it. Much of what I examine, as some posters have noted, will have a touch of melancholy to it. Much of what I like features things like time, water, often the sea itself, mother to us all.

I’ll sometimes tell a story, or a few stories about how the poem came into my life, or why I feel it means a great deal to me.

Today, I’d planned to write about Tennyson’s Ulysses. But then I thought… well, that’s a very well known poem, probably everyone here has read it. While it’s worth chatting about, it’s hardly worth being the inaugural one.

There’s certainly a little bit of melancholy in this tale, and to this poem. Yet there is joy as well. And then, Friday, it became obvious to me. A poem that meant a great deal to me, yet one I’d refused to read for the better part of a decade.

The moment I was out of sight of the crowd I’d read it in front of, I’d thrown the Oxford Book of English Verse — a wonderful book — in a garbage can. Suffice to say, I had some feelings about this poem, or, rather, what it represented.

And now, my tale.

In my salad days (I mean in the Shakespearean sense, not the modern US sense), I was unsure about whether or not to pursue graduate studies, to continue on in academia. It wasn’t that I felt I lacked the intellectual capability; it was more a case of feeling profoundly unsuited to the academic environment.

I didn’t want to work for a government (or governmental agency). And I didn’t want to head a research lab — ever. And I was beginning to discover the byzantine nature of academic politics, which was making me question whether or not I wanted to dwell in the house of Derrida.

And so, back in the summer of 199x, I set out on a journey. I’d read Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance. I had a (new to me) Honda that I’d paid a mighty $8,000.00 for. I’d the usual camping supplies, a good pair of boots, several pairs of clean socks, a good rifle, clean underwear, soap, the usual accoutrements.

In times of doubt, where does one go?

One can go to the sea, as I’ve suggested.

One can go to the mountains: “I will lift up mine eyes unto the mountains, from whence cometh my deliverance.” (Ps. 121).

One can go to a trusted advisor.

I decided to do all three.

I fear that this shall have to be the closing of part I of this tale; I’d written more than I intended, and I’ve yet to respond to all of your comments and emails from Friday on.

The poem shall come, as shall more of this tale, which, I assure you, has a mostly happy ending.

On another note, I’d a great weekend, decompressing before more work. Perhaps I’ll write about wolfe’s escaping the crowd of intelligent yet witlessly chattering females to talk about guns and dogs with men; perhaps I’ll write about wolfe’s crashing (in a computational sense) the grocery store; or perhaps more on blind dates.

Whether or not I write about it, it was a great weekend, and I hope yours was the same.

End of Part I.

-wolfe